I read all the papers, all the papers need to work on grammar and style. Read your papers out loud and you will literally hear the awkward phrases. They make reading the papers difficult and less than academic.

Calicut- Porcello, Mangano, Dantona

Timbuktu- Hunter, Hickey, Rus

Timbuktu- Gray, LaRussa, Carucci

Calicut-Magardician, Keogh, Perciavalle

Timbuktu- Orama Siegel Tiranno

Hangzhou - Shannon, Vera, Schmidt

Huangzhou- Cichy, Dougherty, Ashby

Calicut - DeBardelaben, Gluberman, Jinks

Hangzhou- Spano, Butler, Kasman